Sorry it's been a while. Busy, busy, busy. . .

Working on a "spot" for the Cannes Film Festival. Eric DiLucente said we might be able to attract some eyes if we have a vignette or something to play at our kiosk in addition to having the script and all of the other paper handouts.

You can check out a rough draft here if you like. It's only about ten seconds. It is a 3mb file in Quicktime, so it might take about a minute or two to fully download.

Plus we are in a "re-write" mode on sharpening the "throughline" of the story.

Does anyone out there know what a "throughline" is?

Well, I knew it but I didn't know it's name. Be sure to have that in your story, or it will wander without direction.
Here is the definition - a singular narrative throughline will not be constituted of each and every eventful happening in a person’s life. Rather, the narrative throughline will be defined by the protagonist’s battling with a singular antagonist, a singular opposing force.

Here is a link to a great article, not only on BioPics but throughlines . . . ARTICLE